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Poetry Contest #2 . . . Results!

October 15, 1990
(Note that this contest was actually for fiction!)

  1. Yvette Edmonds-Hay, Delta, British Columbia -- Keyed Out (displayed below)

Honourable Mentions: None.


FIRST PLACE
Keyed Out
By Yvette Edmonds-Hay

Delta, British Columbia

The year: A.D. 2362. Aeskels sat in front of his terminal in the research centre, thinking. He didn't like it, didn't like it at all. Sure he was one of the elite, a privileged brain, but he resented being merely a right-hand man, a tool of Zorcia's. He wanted power.

Zorcia sat in front of her terminal, the tiny disk clasped securely around her neck. In it, was the secret formula in code form. It was the only one of its kind, and she was its keeper. She smiled.

Centuries ago, the human race had been destroyed in a nuclear war precipitated by an oil crisis, all except a handful of scientists led by a brilliant geneticist – Zorcia's ancestor, Helen. As poisonous gasses raged above, Helen hid in the warrens previously inhabited by the Mole People hundreds of feet underground, beneath what was once the New york subway. The mole People had been decimated by AIDS. Helen took with her, her boyfriend, Peter, who was a computer whiz from Harvard, a small group of devoted researchers, and whatever technical equipment and scientific data they could carry. They set up lab underground.

To survive, they grew mushrooms the size of melons, bred rats the size of pigs, and drank fermented mushroom juice.

Working feverishly, they continued with their experiments to recreate human life artificially. Nuclear fallout had destroyed the female reproductive system. Years later, Helen discovered the formula for cloning humans. Peter immediately encoded it on computer. This secret code was passed down through the female line, each generation improving upon it.

"And now it's at its peak," Zorcia gloated.

She was the Surpeme Commander of the Confederation of Liberated Humans of Planet Earth. The City of Vox was the headquarters of the Confederation. It was situated in what was once Florida. The site was chosen because the climate was mild, even balmy, and was ideal for the technological experiments that were continuously being carried out by the Brains.

"Life is paradise," Zorcia thought, pleased with he method of government. It was a benevolent matriarchy. When the time came for her to hand over the reins of government, she herself wold select The Chosen Female from amongst he battalion of Brains.

Even though society was divided into Brains and Underlings, she knew everyone was happy. The Brains were academics, schooled in computer science and electronics. The Underlings carried out the day-to-day work necessary for the smooth running of the Confederation. Males and females were treated equally, and she made sure there was no rivalry between the sexes. There was one woman for every man, each couple perfectly matched. Hedonism was the norm, and pleasures unrestrained. There was plenty of good food, good wine and good entertainment. Everyone owned a two-door helicar fully equipped with aerofoils to fly as well as wheels to travel on the gound. She loved to watch the heli drags on party days when people competed in wide open desert spaces. Her reverie was suddenly interrupted by sharp beeps from her electronic phone-cum-watch. She lifted her wrist to her ear, "Yes?"

"It's Aeskels. I'm all set to receive and program. Ready to target SE-17?"

"Ready. The info should be on your screen in 30 seconds."

Earlier, Aeskels had told her they needed another seventeen thousand people for China, and she had agreed. Their goal was to repopulate Planet Earth to capacity within five years.

She reached up and removed the disc from its pendant-like case hanging from its thief-proof electronic chain around her throat. She would insert it into drive "0" and activate the Sperm-Egg Reproduction/Fertillization code. The formula would be accewpted and decoded in her computer. As soon as this was done, she would retrieve the disk, keeping its secret formula intact once again upon her person. This procedure was necessary to ensure that the formula did not fall into opportunistic hands. She didn't trust anyone. The only other person to see it in her lifetime would be The Chosen Female.

The command for the production of the seventeen thousand fertilized eggs would then be transmitted to Aeskels' receptor, where he was waiting to diversify batches of these eggs to various stations throughout the vast laboratory. Brains would be standing by at their stations to collect the fertilized eggs, pack them in amniotic fluid sacs and transfer them to electronically heated incubators placed on many-tiered shelves. Exactly six months to the minute, the fully-developed babies would be removed from their sacs and placed in large, bright nurseries, where smiling nannies would feed and nurture them. At the age of three, the babies would be transferred from the nursery to the Education Centre, where they would be streamlined into the two groups of Brains and Underlings. They would undergo their training here until adulthood at age sixteen, when they would be shipped out to populate the various targeted places on Earth.

Zorcia bit her lower lip. Blood spurted. She became agitated. Try as she would, she couldn't retrieve the disk. Something was amiss. Sirens sounded in her head. She checked the circuits and outlets. Everything was A-OK,. Yet the disk seemed to have moulded itself into the drive.

"Aeskels, come quickly!" she called on the intercom. She opened her door electronically for him.

He rushed into he office. He stared at her screen. "Mine's fuzzing too," he gritted his teeth. Red lights were flashing wildly on the computer. He tugged at the disk. It wouldn't budge. "You've jammed the computer!"

"Someone's tampered with it!" she hissed angrily.

His hands flew urgently over the keyboard.

"Delete disk?" flashed on the screen.

"No!" her brain screamed. She hadn't been aware of that command. It hadn't been inputted. Before she could push his hands away, he had already pressed "Y."

Her own lover!

She jumped up and stared at him, total disbelief on her face.

A whole race had been destroyed – peacefully this time.

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