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Poetry Contest #28 . . . Results!

October 15, 2003

    1. Susan Constable, Nanoose Bay, British Columbia -- I Wish I'd Said That (displayed below)
    2. Jo-Ann Godfrey, Sherwood Park, Alberta, for All in a Day’s Work (displayed below)
    3. Stephen K. Roney, Kamloops, British Columbia, Seen on the Dragon Boat of Souls (displayed below)
    4. Christy Zutautas, Bradford, Ontario, The Blaze.
    5. Esther Chang, Saratoga, California, Heaven’s Candle.
    6. Brian Bosnell, Brantford, Ontario, Good News Visit.
    7. Laryalee Fraser, Salmon Arm, British Columbia, The Shallow Season.
    8. Mike Arenas, Rancho Cucamonga, California, Never Discount April Rain or its Purpose.
    9. Courtney Scott, Brighton, Michigan, Phantasmagoria.
    10. John Reid, Wyong, Australia, Gone Fishing.
    11. Mandy Misle, Saratoga, California, Sun Kisses.
    12. Irene Golas, Sudbury, Ontario, Bamboo.

    Honourable Mentions: None.


FIRST PLACE POEM
I Wish I'd Said That
By Susan Constable

Nanoose Bay, British Columbia

sixteen and skinny
no meat on her bones
she trembles
sulks and shakes
spying the scissors comb
and clippers she considers
jumping to the floor
does she remember
doing that before
her torn claw staining
the carpet crimson

i hear impatience squeezed
between clenched teeth
sit still he says
just
sit
still

i hear her efforts to escape
nails click-clicking
on the counter top
know she’s defiant disobedient
and deaf

she yelps he growls i shudder

long silky hair
no longer hides the ridge
of bones like stepping stones
down her back and she can’t see
her tail once full and flowing
somehow hacked to stubby tufts
blotches of embarrassment

i feel ashamed
for me for her
i wish i’d said that
i would groom the dog

Copyright (c) 2004 for the author, all rights reserved.

 

SECOND PLACE POEM
All in a Day's Work
By Go-Ann Godfrey
Sherwood Park, Alberta


They sit like robots staring blankly into space,
cushioned in thoughts, dissociated and vague,
waiting for their names to be called.
They can expect one to two hours, which is not
At all outrageous in relation to the world.

The pages of the magazine are dry,
my tongue, my throat, my fingers are dry.
I can’t flip one page at a time, they amass
in bunches. I won’t wet my finger. The bacteria
that must live on these pages. I need rubber gloves.

The ashen walls coincide with these,
trapped in this room, skins of non-living.
I read bits and pieces, weight loss, diets,
multiple orgasms, protection plans, same old thing.
A putrid smell of urine, medicine, and body odour
invade whatever openings it can find.

I try to think of something nice, like eating chocolate,
or walking on hard, wet sand, with the sound
of the ocean beside me. If only I had brought a book.
of my own to read. That’s when she burst in,
tall and thin, on heels like flagpoles.

Her hair, piled on top of her head
like bird feathers in mid-molt.
Walls tremble with the energy she exudes.
“I have an appointment, right now,” she announces.
The receptionist lethargically looks up,
expecting more words, which she gets.
“But where am I supposed to park?”

Feet shuffle. A few coughs happen, and the receptionist
says, “Excuse me?” The newcomer towers
like a lighthouse in a pending storm.
“Tell me, quickly,” she demands
as her fist drums on the counter.
“My motor is running on who knows what,
the kids are suffering from claustrophobia and boredom,
and it’s cold outside.”

“For your information,” the receptionist snaps,
“I am hired to set up appointments, I am not
a parking lot attendant.”
“Well why don’t you get one,” the young woman hisses
and leans over the counter, “And have them phone me
ahead of time if the parking lot is full.”
Mumbling rises from the crowd
like steam from a volcano.
The room quivers and twitches with the remembrance
of possible reactions.

“I don’t have time for this,”
the young woman concludes,
and the door slams behind her.
A couple of people follow her.
A few people strike up a conversation. A name is called.
The phone rings. The receptionist answers.
“Don’t ever call me at work again,” she snarls
and slams down the receiver so hard
that the doctor’s business cards fall off the counter.

Copyright (c) 2004 for the author, all rights reserved.

 

THIRD PLACE POEM
Seen on the Dragon
Boat of Souls

By Stephen K. Roney
Kamloops, British Columbia


Sometimes a journey makes itself necessary.

Relentlessly polite, elaborately uncommunicative;
Sounding as if she’s holding a teacup
With her voice.

Why is she here?
Still as a monument backed by the wandering Yangtze
In this confused tin ferryboat,
Sixteen bunks per stateroom
Smelling of hot urine,
Loud with flies.
Too pretty to be a missionary,
Too solitary to be a wife.
What distant voices summoned her
Above Shanghai
Into the autumn mists?

Kuan Yin, remember us.
None of us can know
All we know, who are on this ferry,
Is that we journey
And do not arrive.

Copyright (c) 2004 for the author, all rights reserved.


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