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FICTION - April, 2003

SECOND PLACE

Yo-Yo

By K.I.M.
Burbank, California

There is only so much amusement one can derive from playing with one’s fingers and toes. And then, like it or not, it’s time to move on. That’s the conclusion little Jenni came to anyway.

The sun had been up for what seemed like a very long time, but still the house was strangely quiet. Jenni swung her little legs over the side of the bed, scooted her butt to the edge and allowed herself to drop to the floor with a soft thud. She tiptoed to the door and opened it slowly.

Not a creature was stirring.

Jenni ran down the long hall just as fast as her little legs would carry her. Toddle, toddle, toddle, toddle. Without quite knowing why, she made a beeline for the refrigerator, opened the door and looked in. It seemed like the thing to do. That’s what big people do.

She looked at all the boxes, bags, cartons and containers of every shape and size for a few seconds. None of it made any sense to her, so she closed the door. Let the big people deal with it.

Jenni spotted a box of yummy crackers on the big table and decided to do the necessary climbing to get them. It was well worth the effort -- not to mention amusing -- to watch the crackers shwoosh across the surface of the table and drop over the edge onto the floor.

After eating her fill of crackers, she climbed down off the table and wandered over to the TV. Jenni couldn’t figure out how to get to the controls, so she decided to abandon the project.

It was a beautiful day.

Sunlight streamed through the windows and made big, bright patches on the floor. Jenni could feel the sunshine beckoning to her. Who was she to deny? She went to the front of the house, opened the door and looked out. The yard and everything in it was resplendent with morning dew.

Joy flooded Jenni’s soul.

She ran outside and tried to touch every beautiful thing. It was too much for one little girl. Jenni noticed that the neighbor’s yard was beautiful too. And the next one. And the next. Jenni wandered in wonder farther than she had ever gone before. How could she resist such beckoning beauty?

Somehow she found herself in a backyard filled with flowers. Jenni crawled under a flowering bush and found herself in a different yard that was overgrown and brown, but still somehow beautiful with dew. She picked her way through the bushes and weeds toward an open area.

There were some rusty lawn chairs, ash trays, bottles and, beyond these, a gaping hole in the ground. Jenni had almost decided to turn around and go back when she spotted Yo-Yo on the ground by the big hole.

What was Yo-Yo doing here?

Yo-Yo was Jenni’s most-est, best-est, special-est, favorite-est toy in the whole world. Big people called him Pinocchio, but he would always be Yo-Yo to her. He must, of course, be rescued.

Jenni picked Yo-Yo up and looked down into the hole. She lost her breath & fear gripped her chest. It was the most horrible scene she had ever seen.

The gaping hole was actually a swimming pool.

Empty, except for the pool of filthy black water at the very bottom. And in the water were various toys -- bicycle, tricycle, beach ball, etc. -- and various other unidentifiable things. But most horrifying of all, to Jenni at least, was the life-sized baby doll floating face down in the water.

Jenni suddenly saw herself in that baby doll.

She saw herself standing by the edge of the pool. She felt herself pitching face forward into empty space. She imagined herself hitting the water face first. She felt water ... the water ... the horrible black water ... closing over her head. And she saw nothing else.

Jenni felt herself swooning and realized that she was clutching Yo-Yo to her chest. She wanted to cry, but there was no one to wipe her tears. It suddenly occurred to her how alone she was. Jenni backed away from the hole of horror and ran back the way she had come.

She burst through the bushes into the backyard of beauty. There was a woman putting birdseed in a box. Jenni burst into tears. The woman couldn’t have been more surprised.

“ Oh, my. Hello, little one. How did you get here? There, there. Aren’t you Eva’s little girl? Just sit here now while I call your mama.”

Jenni was so happy to see her mother’s big lavender Pontiac that she didn’t really care that she also seemed to be in trouble.

“ You’re going to get a spanking when we get home, young lady.”

Jenni climbed into the passenger seat and looked at her mother with big, round eyes.

“ I good, mommy. Promise.”

“ You’d better be good. You can’t just go running around the neighborhood like that. You scared mommy to death.”

“ I sorry.”

Eva looked down at Jenni clutching Yo-Yo to her chest. She frowned. Something seemed wrong ... but it didn’t click. Eva pulled the door closed. Thank God her baby was safe.

A few weeks later, Eva and Jerry received an invitation to a neighborhood pool party. It seemed like a good idea, that is, until Jerry tried to introduce little Jenni to the swimming pool. She burst into tears and started screaming, “Black water! Black water! Baby doll, no! Black water bad!”

No one could understand why Jenni would be so frightened, especially since she had never seen a swimming pool before. Jerry finally picked her up and carried her to the pool.

“ See, the swimming pool is nice. Pretty water. It’s not black. Look at it, honey. The water is pretty.”

Jenni was determined not to look at the pool, but she accidentally got a glimpse of it as she was shaking her head back and forth. It was pretty. She stopped crying. Jenni was astonished. How could this be the same pool? But, no matter how hard anyone tried, Jenni could not be persuaded to go near the pool. She seemed on the one hand to be fascinated by it, but then again she kept her distance from it the entire day.

The next day, Jerry was back at work and Eva assumed her usual station in front of the TV -- glued, not to soap operas like the rest of her friends, but to news reports of the Apollo space program. She liked to watch and discuss the happenings with a like-minded aunt over the telephone. Eva also kept half an eye on Jenni while she played. All was domestic harmony from day to day.

Except for this day.

There was a nagging ... something. Eva looked at Jenni and frowned. What was it? Jenni squealed and ran across the room, a Yo-Yo doll dangling from each hand. Eva gasped and sat up straight.

Two Yo-Yos?

“ Are you all right, dear?” like-minded aunt asked over the phone.

“ Oh, yes. I ... it’s nothing. I just thought something was wrong with Jenni for a moment, but everything’s fine.”

Eva sat back and let auntie do all the chattering for once. Her mind was finally clicking ...

Jenni ran away that day. She was found up in that area. In that area where the Fergusons live. The Fergusons who just had the pool party. The Fergusons who recently sent their baby girl to live with grandma. Or so they say. Jenni was found up there with a Yo-Yo doll. A fairly new Yo-Yo doll. Jenni’s Yo-Yo doll is old. Jenni was afraid of the Ferguson’s swimming pool, even though she’s never seen a swimming pool before. Or has she?

“ Jenni, sweetheart, come here please. Let mommy see Yo-Yo. No, not that one. The other one. Jenni, tell mommy. Where did you get this Yo-Yo?”

“ Black water bad. Baby doll, no. Black water, mommy.”

“ Jenni, did you find this Yo-Yo by the black water?”

Jenni nodded her head gravely.

When Eva told Jerry that night, he said, “Call the police.”

“ But, you don’t think ... ?”

“ I grew up with the Fergusons. They always ran with a fast crowd. I don’t trust them. Fergie’s wife just inherited that house and they just recently fixed it up. That’s why they were showing it off to everyone.”

“ And what kind of people would send their baby off to live with grandma for no good reason? They just inherited a house. They’re doing well.”

“ Right. Call the police.”

As it turned out, although the Fergusons were under suspicion at first for murder, it was later ruled an accidental death. There was, however, some unpleasantness about their having buried the body in the flower garden.

Little Jenni -- grown-up Jennifer -- did eventually get over her fear of swimming pools. And she fondly considers this her very first case: The Case of the Two Yo-Yos. And it’s an especially fond memory for her ... now that she has her P.I. license.

Copyright (c) 2003 for the author, all rights reserved.

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