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FICTION - June, 2003

FIRST PLACE

The Cocktail Ring

By Kathy Altman
King George, Virginia

“ How about these?” Mrs. Jacobs held up a pair of elbow-length pink lace gloves.

“ Mother!” Andrea rolled her eyes. “Pink! Oh, please! I’m not pretending I’m, like, Scarlett O’Hara or anything. I’m not wearing flounces.”

Mrs. Jacobs shrugged and carefully replaced the pair of gloves on the shelf. Realizing she wasn’t helping, she wisely stepped away to browse through the handbag display.

Andrea shook her head and reached for a pair of black silk gloves. Simple, yet dramatic. They would go well with the white chiffon sheath she’d be wearing. She’d look elegant, understated, like a fashion model. She’d probably look like she was making some kind of important, intelligent statement with her black-and-white outfit.

She hummed along with the instrumental music that was being discreetly released by overhead speakers. Andrea was on top of the world. She actually had a date for the junior prom. Brent Hollister had asked her. She was pretty lucky, Brent being her third choice and all. Most of her friends hadn’t even been asked by their eight or ninth choices. And wouldn’t be. They’d have to go with their brothers or cousins or whatever.

Andrea really deserved to have been asked by her first choice, Ethan. They would have looked so good together, Andrea like a Greek goddess ... or no, more like one of those Greek column thingies they learned about in world history class. Katydids? Whatever. Anyway, with tall, white-blonde Ethan beside her, they would have made an arresting couple.

Yeah, arresting, Andrea mocked to herself. Brent was probably a safer date. She’d heard that Ethan was into drugs.

Andrea set the black silk gloves aside as a definite possibility. Then she spotted a gorgeous sapphire-blue pair of gloves, trimmed with black fur. She would really look stylish in those.

“ Oh, not ‘katydid’“, she suddenly remembered. “Caryatid.”

She picked up a glove, and noting it was right-handed, she excitedly thrust the fingers of her right hand into the fur-trimmed opening. She pictured herself caressing Brent’s broad shoulders, or maybe even slapping his cheek, with sapphire-clad hands.

She frowned as her fingers brushed something cold and hard in one of the fingers of the glove. She jerked at the fingertips to pull the glove off. She held the glove by the fingers and shook it over her hand. Out dropped a large ring.

Andrea’s eyes widened as she saw the size of the ring. It was a large round-cut emerald, about the size of a dime, surrounded by smaller diamond circles. She was no precious gem expert, but she sensed that the stones were genuine. Her head jerked up and her mouth opened to call to her mother of her discovery. But Mrs. Jacobs was several feet away, holding up a string of pearls for close inspection.

Andrea looked around and realized that no one else was close enough to have witnessed her finding. She suddenly became aware of her heart as something live within her chest as it began to beat frantically against her breastbone.

“ Finders, keepers,” she thought to herself excitedly. She looked down at the ring nestled in her palm, and wondered if she dared keep it.

“ Why not?” she asked herself. “You found it.” She looked around again, furtively. “And there’s no one wandering around miserable as if they’d lost a gorgeous emerald ring.”

And then her mother was there. “Oh, Andrea!” she said, and her daughter’s shoulders slumped as she recognized that her mother would make her turn in the ring. But then her mother touched the sapphire gloves she held in her left hand. “I think those are a little much, don’t you?” Andrea’s right hand fisted around the ring.

When they returned home from the mall, Andrea ran straight upstairs to her room and shut the door. She rushed over to the mirror, digging in the front pocket of her jeans for her prize.

She slipped the ring onto the middle finger of her left hand and held out her hand admiringly, her fingers splayed. Then she looked in the mirror and spread her fingers over her opposite shoulder, laughing coquettishly at her reflection. She gently struck her cheek with her left hand in mock surprise, shook her head and ran her left hand through her hair, and offered her left hand to an imaginary gentleman who was struck speechless by her beauty.

Andrea could see that the emerald was the perfect stone for her. It sparkled and flashed against the dark tone of her skin. She couldn’t wait to see the kids’ expressions at school when she started carelessly gesturing with her heavy left hand.

Only she couldn’t, of course. She knew that. She realized that she wouldn’t be able to wear the ring in public for a long time. Her reflection suddenly sobered. A long time. Not until she was in college, maybe. Where no one knew her. Where no one would wonder how she suddenly came by such a spectacular piece of jewelry.

College. That was over a year away.

Andrea sank down on the edge of her bed and absently twisted the ring on her finger. When her mother yelled up the stairs that dinner was ready, she jumped up and hid the ring in her underwear drawer. She was nearly downstairs when she decided that was the very first place someone would look. So she ran back upstairs and retrieved the ring, then stood in the center of her room, biting her lip as she wondered where she should hide it.

Finally, she remembered something she’d seen on TV. She hurried across the hall into the bathroom and hid the ring in the little plastic container that held her floss. Then she proudly tripped down the stairs, hugging her secret to herself.

Her father had to ask her three times to pass the scalloped potatoes. “Andrea, is something bothering you?” he asked, concerned.

Andrea shook her dark curls and targeted a bright white smile at her father. Her mother leaned over to whisper in his ear. “I think she’s getting a little nervous about the prom, dear. It’s probably best if we don’t press.”

As early as she could without prompting any health questions, Andrea excused herself from the table. She swiftly cleared her dishes and took the stairs two at a time back to the bathroom. She locked the door and fumbled in the medicine chest for the case of floss. Yes, the ring was still safely tucked inside.

Andrea looked at herself in the mirror, at her eyes widened with anxiety and her hair in disarray and her small chest heaving. Forgetting the ring in her hand, she again admired the image looking back at her from the mirror. “I look like the beautiful damsel in distress.” She shook her generous hair back over her shoulders. “I could be one of Charlie’s Angels.”

Her mother called up the stairs. “Honey, don’t forget your essay is due tomorrow. Why don’t you bring down your rough draft so that Dad and I can review it?”

Andrea rolled her eyes at herself in the mirror and leaned over to open the bathroom door. “Okay, Mom!” she yelled. “Be down in a few minutes!”

Andrea’s eyes suddenly flew open and she sat up in bed, her heartbeat stumbling. She’d dreamed something important. What was it?

She looked around the room frantically, willing her eyes to adjust to the dark.

A wedding. That was it. She’d dreamed of a wedding. But why was that important?

And then she remembered. The ring. She’d been thinking of it only as a trinket lost by some old lady, someone in her fifties at least, someone who had plenty of money. Someone who’d barely notice that she’d even lost the ring. Someone who could buy another just like it with half the money in her cookie jar.

But what if it had been someone’s engagement ring?

Andrea pictured a trembling young bride-to-be. She’d been buying gloves to go with her wedding gown. She’d wanted to look perfect for her groom. And then she was on her way home from shopping when she realized the weightlessness of her left hand. She’d splay her hand just as Andrea had done, only in anguish and terror, because she knew that her husband-to-be would hit her in his anger ...

Wait a minute. Andrea shook her head at herself and choked out a laugh. It couldn’t have been an engagement ring. She’d found it in the right glove, not the left.

She lay back in bed and concentrated on slowing her breathing.

When she woke up the next morning, she smiled slightly at the sun spilling so cheerfully in through her bedroom window. She loved the pattern it made on her carpet as it streamed through and around the trinkets she’d hung in her window. But her smile faded as she remembered that there was some reason she shouldn’t enjoy it. Shouldn’t be content.

Of course. The ring.

The burden of the secret and its companion guilt was wearing on Andrea. She wasn’t getting enough sleep, and she was starting to get snippy with her friends. When she got home from school three days after finding the ring, she looked at herself in the mirror, at the dark circles under her eyes and the unhappiness within them. “Keep this up”, she told herself, “and you’ll look so haggy that Brent will back out of taking you to the prom.”

That very evening, she borrowed the car and, with the ring wrapped in a tissue and tucked in a small zipper pocket of her purse, Andrea returned to the store where she’d found the ring.

A young college-age girl was running the register in the accessories department. Andrea hesitated. She’d been hoping to turn the ring over to an older woman. Someone who would be gentle and understanding and soothing, like her grandma. Not someone who would flip her hair and pop her gum and look superior.

Andrea started to back away. If she surrendered the ring to this girl, she was just as likely to succumb to its siren call as Andrea had. Girl’s best friend, and all that.

But then a woman with white curls and a round, lined face stepped behind the counter and waved the girl away as if to send her on a break. Andrea knew a sign when she saw one. She retrieved the ring from her purse and stepped up to the counter and the older woman who was energetically dusting it.

“ May I help you?” The woman eyed Andrea.

Andrea cleared her throat and readjusted the strap of her purse on her thin shoulder. “Yes, ma’am,” she said in a low voice. “I found this when I was trying on evening gloves.” No need to mention this was several days ago.

She held her fist over the counter, fingers up, and then uncurled her fingers to reveal the ring snuggled against her palm. The stones winked under the display lights.

“ Oh, my!” The woman plucked the ring out of Andrea’s hand and held it up in front of her nose. “This is quite a find, young lady!” She looked down at Andrea wonderingly. “You do realize this is genuine?”

“ I wasn’t sure ...”

“ Well, it certainly is!” She shook her white curls and beamed. “What an honest young lady you are! You should be very proud of yourself for turning this in. Now let’s see ...” she pulled a notebook from under the counter and began to flip through the pages. “I see no report of a lost ring, but I’m sure someone will be in looking for it soon. A ring of this quality will surely be missed. And I’m certain there will be a reward.” She shoved paper and a pen across the counter to Andrea. “I’ll tell you what. Why don’t you write down your name and telephone number, so that whoever reclaims this can call to thank you.”

Andrea dutifully supplied her name and number, and then began to back away from the counter. “Thank you.”

“ No, thank you, dear. It’s so refreshing to meet such an honest young person.”

Andrea turned and walked away from the counter. She didn’t feel very honest. She was a little sad that she no longer had that glorious, flashy ring in her possession, but she supposed it was for the better. Her friends would have been jealous. And she probably would have been caught with it sooner or later. And then what would she say to her parents? Oh, well. Some lucky woman would once more be able to impress her friends at dinner parties, and Andrea would be able to get more sleep. Her looks demanded it.

The white-haired saleslady watched Andrea until she was no longer in view. Then she held the ring up to the light once more. “Such an amazing shade of green,” she thought. “It would go so well with that sweater I got for my birthday last week ...”

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