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FICTION - July, 2003

FIRST PLACE

King Alexander and the Knot

By James Saint-Cloud
San Rafael, California

333 B.C., Gordia, in what is today Turkey.

People crowd to see me along the dusty road to Gordia. Eyes squinting through the wind and sun to see the Macedonian that has put the Persian king to rout, come now to encounter their own town’s famous legacy from King Midas’ time: Rope twisted around a cart hitch in a ball. Shall anyone untie it? The legend says all Asia will be his.

Curiosity alone brings me here today. “Make a detour to see the knot at Gordia,” they urged, and I almost said no. I shrugged. Asia shall be mine to rule anyway, I knew. And all the world a knot I shall unloose.

If I had been alone, it might have been different. I might have simply looked at the thing, poked about and laughed and gone again. But there are so many curious faces now. Hundreds! Filling all the bright windy space. I have routed Darius once, they know. “Shall this young king prevail,” the eyes all ask, “Shall Persia fall to him?” Then no longer Darius but Alexander shall be ruling them! So much tension, to see what I will do today. To watch the victorious conqueror when he shall fail. Shall I curse and weep, they are wondering, when I have met defeat? Pout? Stamp my feet? One thing is sure: My failure today is fore-ordained. No one else has had success. So why should I? It is a familiar spectacle. This knot is a crafty joke at the expense of anyone who tries.

Ah. There it is. Large enough. A thick brown endless snake lying sleeping in a ball. The challenge is to find its head, the end of it, so cleverly hidden in its mass. It begins nowhere; it is everywhere en route. The snake that eats its tail! I kneel to work, prying the coils apart to search between. How have they concealed the rope’s end so well? It is a world, like any other. And I shall master it.

I am lost in my task, until I sense whispering, a great viper slithering all around. I look up. The people have begun to make sly comments as they watch, and curl their mouths. One of them sneers. It bites at my heart. I stand, to better see who is mocking me. Yes, a sneer! Faster than thought the lightning from its sheath is loosed, a slender silver storm that is meant for him—I step in his direction with my sword.

The smirk flies away, the serpent disappears into a hole.

I wheel to look at all these others encircling me. Startled, they shrink back. Dust and heat rush coiling to my head. Here I am, my sword up in the air. I must bring it down somewhere. And I see the knot. The great brown head bares its fangs at me! My sword comes down on it, unties its snarl easily. Just as that bright edge unties all Asia for me now.

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